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Punctuation No-No's Writers Must Avoid

5/29/2014

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When I first started writing I made a lot of mistakes. I still do. I'm also cheeky enough that if I think something looks weird, and I know it shouldn't be there, I'll put it in anyway (my title to this post has a no-no). My major problems stem from bad habits. For example, when writing dialogue, I tend to use a lot of exclamation marks. I know I shouldn't. I know that I'm going to have to go back through my manuscript and edit them all out. But, when a scene is exciting, I forget and fall back into my 'old' ways.

I was thoroughly chastised once by a fellow writer, who read an unedited chapter of a novel I was working on. He counted 25 exclamation points - and that was just one chapter! I'm so embarrassed to admit that! Oh my gosh! There I go again! Ack! I can't help myself!

I love exclamation points. They allow me to express myself in ways that a period cannot. And that is the problem. If I have to use an exclamation point, I am telling not showing.

Exclamation points, along with several words that I've learned to cull from my vocabulary are, unfortunately, a no-no in the literary world. My writer friend told me that editors will allow four per novel. Now, I don't know if that's true, but I can tell you one thing - there is no way in a blue moon that I am going to be able to limit myself to four exclamation points in a 300 page novel. It's impossible! See? There I go again.

For what it's worth, I no longer have 25 exclamation points in that chapter. I have zero. I'm heartbroken. I'm also wondering why my English teacher never told me someday I would have to give up these little wonders. I mean seriously, why make them at all if you can't use them? Who decided to cut them out anyway? I may just stage a protest in defence of the lowly exclamation point. But not now, I have to make sure the following words and phrases are not used either. I will protest their demise at a later date. And yes, I used a few of them in writing this post. I'm a writing rebel. I can't help myself. (I got this list a long time ago from a book on grammar and punctuation in writing. I cannot remember the name of the book, but I kept the list just in case):

Get rid of the following words and phrases:


  • Almost, actually practically, probably, naturally, virtually, undoubtedly, positively, definitely, suddenly, really, absolutely (oh what the heck - anything with -ly on the end)
  • As you must know
  • So (yep, you can't use it. It's like so not appropriate).
  • But
  • Just (I agree with this. This word must be weeded out of the English language).
  • Oh (Really? Oh?)
  • Well
  • Little (you can use tiny, minuscule, small, wee, but apparently not little, I'm not sure why).
  • Tiny (Oops! My bad, you can't use tiny either).
  • It goes without saying (that you can't use this phrase).
  • As you can see (you can't use this phrase either).
  • Anyway
  • Then (Then?!? You have got to be kidding me!)

These are all words that have to be done away with if you are a writer. Some of them are filler words. For example: I just went to the supermarket, is better said - I went to the supermarket. See what I mean? "Just" is not needed.

Lesson for today: Go through your manuscript and weed out the above mentioned words and phrases. Oh, and one more thing - don't forget to get rid of your exclamation points!

4 Comments
Tracy Krauss link
5/29/2014 02:47:16 pm

This is a great list!!!!!

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Laura Davis link
5/29/2014 03:51:34 pm

Thanks Tracy! Oops! There go those exclamation points again. I see you like them too. LOL!

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Nicole Rickman link
8/19/2014 03:07:43 pm

Thanks for these tips. I am working on my third book and I can already see a difference in how I write.

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Laura J. Davis
8/20/2014 01:45:03 am

That's great Nicole! Thanks for stopping by.

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